Ok, looking around my office. It needs much improvement.
First things first. Maybe some way to write a welcome note that is put in each new player's inbox.
Second, the character descriptions are useless fluff. I really don't need those. Maybe instead information like level and date/time the person was last active.
Finally, more information about the town. I don't need a screen with just the population count, I get that in the Town Hall screen. Information that would be helpful would be:
- Number of players at each level
- Names of new players added in the past week
- Names of players on vacation
- Names of players who are dying